For our Speech Communication class, we are to create our own product and persuade it in class using the Monroe’s Motivated Sequence…

General Purpose: To persuade

Specific Purpose: To persuade my audience to try using Gata de Pinas Shampoo.

Thesis: Do not make your day a bad hair day, to have healthy and glamorous hair, use Gata de Pinas Shampoo and shine as a star.

Type: Persuasive speech of policy

Organizational Pattern: Monroe’s motivated sequence

I.Introduction

ATTENTION

Is dry hair driving your heart?

Does itchy scalp pissed you off?

Or maybe tangled hair ruin your day?

Hair could be a big problem: it can cause you to have a bad day. Making your hair at its best may cause you hundreds of dollar in the parlor. But with “Gata de Pinas Shampoo”, it has all the essential ingredients to make your hair perfect.

Body

NEED

II.Having a hair problem would cost you much in order for your healthy hair to be restored to its normal beauty with a tail of risk.

A.Having your hair relaxed, rebonded, and hot oiled on a salon will be so expensive.

1.Especially today’s economy is going down; it is not wise to spend your money on things which are not really important.

B.According to an article bySusan Maxwell Schmidt,”having a hair problem could waste your money in buyinghair products hawked by salon and handfuls of expensive vitamins to have all the essential ingredients for your hair.”

1.But using these lots of different hair products can be a risk on your hair; it can cause damage because of the different chemicals it contains.

III.Hair problem is a hassle on your day to day activities.

A. On your busy daily activities, having a hair problem is a waste of time.

1.You always need to look better, especially your hair is noticeable and a great asset, you need to do or apply stuffs on your hair to make it look good.

C.When going to school or workplace, you need to be physically presentable.

1.If you’re not physically presentable, you will easily get noticed and would affect how others perceive your credibility in both school and workplace.

2.People had their first impression on a person by looking on the person’s look. So you always need to be the best you are not only mentally, but also physically.

SATISFACTION

IV.As stated above, having hair problems could affect you, not only physically, but emotionally as well. It could also affect your self-concept and self-esteem. Oftentimes, other thinks that salon hair treatment is the best way to maintain your healthy hair. But it will be so expensive and it could be a risk. That’s why our company made “Gata de PinasShampoo” for people who want a healthy perfect hair but won’t take a lot of money and time.

VISUALIZATION

V.Gata de Pinas Shampoo is the wisest, safest and easiest way to allow your hair to show its natural beauty.

A. By using our product, no more wasting of time in salon and applying a lot of stuffs on your hair to make your hair beautiful.

B. By using our product frequently, your hair will smile to everyone.

C. Just because of all the leading ingredients in other hair products are all in Gata de Pinas Shampoo for a perfect hair makeover.IT’S AN ALL IN ONE SHAMPOO!

1. It has Zinc Vitanol clinically effective to remove dandruff and prevent it from coming back.

2. It has Photolipid for sun protection and will restore your healthy scalp and the smoothness of

your hair.

3. It has Almond Oil and Pro Extracts that nourishes your hair, and coats it with cellophane-like shine naturally.

4. And the main ingredient: Coconut Cream and Milk Protein that hits you like a milk bath and leaves your hair irresistibly soft.

VI. Conclusion

ACTION

What are you waiting for? Don’t wait for miracle to happen on your hair without doing anything. It’s your time to shine. Visit your nearest grocery store now and buy Gata de Pinas Shampoo for a healthy and glamorous hair that last!